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I am a freshmen and this my first year ever pole vaulting and i am looking for improvement. please critique me!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hnh02mTXOu4

Oh goodness please don't vault again until you put padding around the standard bases an the concrete sticking out around it. You won't jump very high if you kill yourself on a jump gone wrong

haha thanks for the safety concern.